Kimi no Ticket
Version 1.0
Translation by Jill Astley
Translation property of www.lijaka.com
Notes:Comments not
in speech bubbles are in ()brackets.
Written stuff is in <>
brackets.
Thoughts are in italic.
Panels are separated by double
spaces.
pg1
Title Page
pg2
Hinata-chan:Shinobuu!
Shinobu: A-
Shinobu: Hinata-chan, what
class are you in?
Hinata-chan:Class 5, the same
as Shinobu.
Shinobu: Oh good.
Hinata-chan:Oh, and he's in
our class too.
Shinobu: He?
pg3
Hinata-chan: Toyota-kun
Shinobu: EEEEEEEEEH!!?
Hinata-chan: Aren't you
glad, you and the guy you like are in the same class
Shinobu: Wai-Wait a second
Shinobu: I can't really say
he's the ''guy I like", I don't really have any right to that title!!
Hinata-chan: Then what
would you call it?
Shinobu: ...Someone I think
about a lot...maybe... (Does that way sound more rude? Hmm)
Hinata-chan: Oh, really(whichever
you want)
Hinata-chan: Oh-there
he is
Shinobu: EH! Where Where!?
pg4
Hinata-chan: Over there!
Shinobu: It's really him...Toyota-kun
From now on, we'll both
be in this classroom everyday....
Hinata-chan: What do
you like about him anyways?
Shinobu: I've told you a nillion
times!
Hinata-chan: (My seat is...)
Hinata-chan: Oh yeah, something
to do with a ticket
Shinobu: Yes!
(It was)
pg5
(Last year's School Festival)
Shinobu: Hinata-chan is late...
She said we would walk around together...
Toyota-kun: Hey, you over there
pg6
Toyota-kun: Are you free?
Shinobu: Th-this person...
Shinobu: The guy people
talk about as being really popular...!! Why is he talking to me?!
Shinobu: Ah, well, free...
Toyota-kun: You're free right?
Here have this.
Shinobu: Eh- Ah...Oh, passing
out tickets.... Is that all it was...
Shinobu: That's why he talked
to me...
Toyota-kun: Oh yeah
Shinobu: Embarrassment...That's
right, of course it must be something like that...
pg7
Toyota-kun: Don't give that
to anyone else(you'll be cursed)
Shinobu: Eh? Why?
Toyota-kun: Ah-it's a special
for cute girls
Toyota-kun: Be sure to come
ok?
Toyota-kun: I'll be waiting
Shinobu: He was like that to
everyone but
Shinobu: I was pulled in by
that smile...
pg8
Shinobu: But Toyota-kun was
surrounded by people... There was no way for me to get close to him
Hinata-chan: From then
you've always kept the ticket right
Shinobu: Yes
Shinobu: This is the only thing
connecting Toyota-kun and I .
I'm sure Toyota-kun doesn't
remember but...
Shinobu: And...I feel like
if I keep this, someday Toyota-kun will smile at me again...
pg9
Student:Um, it's a bit sudden
but we're going to do the seat change now
Hinata-chan: Take a
paper
Hinata-chan: Ah- This
one is Shinobu's
Student: (Yeah, I got the
back)
Student: (Aagh, this sucks)
Shinobu: Lucky! The
first back seat! Next to me is...
Shinobu: TO-TOYO-TOYOTA-KUN!!??
Toyota-kun: (Hm-hmhm-hm)
Shinobu: Hinata-chan, you
did this on purpose didn't you-?
Toyota-kun: Kawakami-san
pg10
Shinobu: Eh?
Toyota-kun: I'm Toyota.
Nice to meet you
Shinobu: A-Ni-Nice to meet
you
Toyota-kun knows my name!
I'm so happy!
Sensei: Hey quiet down
Sensei: (Oh, you're doing
the seat change)
Sensei: We're having a quiz
Student: (No!)
<15 minutes>
<Finished>
Sensei: Marking will be done
by the person next to you
Sensei: Under 5 marks means
makeup test.
Toyota-kun: OK, here
you go.
Shinobu: Ye-yes
pg11
Shinobu: That's right,
this is...
Toyota-kun's first quiz
of the year!
Ah, Toyota-kun's writing...
That I can mark his sentences...he
was so unreachable<mind's image>
<Strong Emotion>
This just might be complete
happiness~
pg12
Toyota-kun: Wow, all correct!
Shinobu: Th-thanks
My quiz, with Toyota-kun's
circles on it... *In Japan, a circle is the mark for correct and a
checkmark is wrong.
When I get it back I'll
treasure it....
Toyota-kun: How was mine?
Student: (What was the minimum?)
Sensei: (5 points)
Student: (Wah, makeup test)
Shinobu: Ah-yes...
Toyota-kun: Whoa-only one right?
Uh-oh
Shinobu: Wa-wa-waaa Toyota-kun
is so close!
Toyota-kun: (Just let me correct
this, ok correct)
Sensei: HEY!Toyota, are you
changing your answers?I can see you
Toyota-kun: Uh-oh
pg13
Sensei: You haven't changed
even if you changed grades
Toyota-kun: (Heh heh, I'm
flattered)
Sensei: Write out each English
sentence 10 times! As well as the makeup test
Toyota-kun: EEEEH??!!
Student: A hahahaha dummy
Toyota-kun: Don't laugh!
You guys are doing it too!
Student: (A hahahaha)
Student: (That's it Toyota)
Sensei: Be quiet!
Toyota-kun: Kawakami-san, do
you think I'm an idiot!? I'm actually quite clever
Student: You're an idiot
Shinobu: Ah...
Shinobu: I think I understand
why Toyota is so popular...
Toyota-kun: I'm really good
at math, you know
Student: Liar
Toyota-kun: (Who are you anyway)
pg14
Hinata-chan: So how's
your seat?
Shinobu: A, yeah, e heh heh
Shinobu: Ah, I thought it was
your doing!
Hinata-chan: Oh? But
it might have been because of your ticket
Shinobu: Eh?
Hinata-chan: Ah
Hinata-chan: It's Toyota-with
3 girls too
Shinobu: That close...
Hinata-chan: Let's go
Shinobu
Shinobu: Yeah
pg15
Shinobu: It was nothing
special to Toyota, I know....
Toyota-kun: Kawakami-san!
and Matsuzawa-san
Toyota-kun: Bye-bye! See you
tomorrow!
Girl: (Who's that?)
Shinobu: I'm just 1 person
in the crowd
I can't think that I'm
special
But still...I'm happy
pg16
Sensei: (This sentence is
a point)
Shinobu: Aah...It's so
boring, there's not even a quiz
Toyota-kun is taking notes
so seriously...
That side of him is wonderful
too...
Toyota-kun: Is there a resemblance?
<Sensei><"Read books!">
Shinobu: BUFUU!
Sensei: HEY!
Sensei: What are you two doing!!
<Matching^_^ >
<Not happy >
pg17
Toyota-kun: Jeez, it was because
you were so loud
Shinobu: Ah
Shinobu: Do you mean it's my
fault?
Toyota-kun: That's right,
how are you going to make up for it?
Shinobu: What will I do,
he's angry at me...
Toyota-kun: Pu
Toyota-kun: I was just joking,
that's cute
Shinobu: Ah...
Shinobu: If one became Toyota's
'special someone' I wonder if this smile would be just for that person...
pg18
Shinobu: Sensei talks so
much, it got late...
I should go home quickly
Wow, what a mess...
Go home...qui...
I can't leave it like this...
Toyota-kun: Oh-Kawakami-san?
Shinobu: Ah-Toyota-kun
Toyota-kun: What are you doing?
Shinobu: E-Well, I'm tidying
these books
Toyota-kun: Huh? Did
the teacher tell you to?
pg19
Shinobu: No, but it bothered
me...
Somehow I'm embarrassed~
He'll think I'm a goody-goody...
Toyota-kun: How admirable.
OK, I'll help too
Shinobu: Eh-you don't have
to
Toyota-kun: It's ok, you've
impressed me
Shinobu: Wah, what should
I do?
Toyota-kun: I like girls who
can do stuff like this
pg20
Shinobu: Ah, I can't help
it, I'm getting ideas...
Toyota-kun: Kawakami-san,
you're not in a club?
Shinobu: No, I just go home
Toyota-kun: Me too
Toyota-kun: Though in junior
high I was on fire
Shinobu: I can't believe
it...
Shinobu: Oh? What club?
Toyota-kun: Baseball...
Shinobu: Oh really?
That I'm talking like this
with Toyota-kun...
Shinobu: ?What?
Toyota-kun: Nothing...
Hinata-chan: Aa, Shinobu~
Hinata-chan: I was looking
for-
Shinobu: A-Hinata-chan!
Toyota-kun: Hello
Hinata-chan: I wonder if
I interrupted...
pg21
Shinobu: Bye
Toyota-kun: Bye
Shinobu: Toyota-kun...
Hinata-chan: Let's go
Shinobu: Maybe the ticket
did help...
It would be nice to become
better friends with him...
<Service Ticket-tea-Toyota-kun>
pg22
Shinobu: Outside the classroom
it's the same as ever
Yesterday almost seems
like a dream...
With just the ticket connecting
us,
I'm probably not even a
friend
Student: (Hurry, Kawakami-san)
Sensei: Gather round!
Shinobu: I have to help with
the gym clean-up, so Hinata-chan, you go ahead
Hinata-chan: OK I'll
go buy some???
Shinobu: Huh? Is that
possibly...
pg23
Shinobu: Toyota-kun!!
I wonder if I should lend
him my towel, no-one's around
But I wonder if he'll think
I have feelings for him...
Who cares about that!!
As long as I can be of help to him!
Shinobu: Toyota-kun
Shinobu: Uh, you can use mine
if you want, I'm not using it
Shinobu: What should I do,
he's not reacting at all...
I wonder if it's a bother...
I shouldn't have been so
bold...
Toyota-kun: You haven't changed,
eh?
pg24
Shinobu: E?
Shinobu: What?
Toyota-kun: Ah-nothing.
Shinobu: What did that
mean?
Toyota-kun: Ah-thanks, I'll
wash it and return it!
Shinobu: Toyota-kun...?
pg25
Shinobu: A-I forgot to hand
in my math prinout!
Hinata-chan: Eh, uh-oh,
it was only until today (You'll be lectured)
Shinobu: I'll go back
Hinata-chan: Do you want me
to go too?
Shinobu: No, it's ok, you
can go home
Hinata-chan: Really, ok.
Shinobu: Byebye!
Hinata-chan: Be careful coming
home!
Shinobu: ok-Later!
Shinobu: Aa-drat!
Sensei talks so much!
(it's already 6:00!)
Shinobu: Walking the streets
at night is dangerous!
Toyota-kun: Wa
Shinobu: Kya!
pg26
Toyota-kun: Are you ok?
Shinobu: ...I'm sorry
Toyota-kun: Did you get everything?
Shinobu: Wah, I'm so embarrassed...
Shinobu: Yeah, thanks
Toyota-kun: Ah!
Toyota-kun: Is this Kawakami-san's?
Shinobu: Eh?
Shinobu: A-the ticket! Oh
no! If he sees-
Shinobu: No!
He'll find out!
pg27
Toyota-kun: A ha-ha-sorry
Shinobu: He didn't see
it...? Thank heavens...
Toyota-kun: That's from last
year's school festival right?
Toyota-kun: Why do you have
it?
Shinobu: Found out...!!
I can't hide it any longer!
Shinobu: Well...
Shinobu: But, maybe this
is my chance
Toyota-kun: N?
Shinobu: I...
Shinobu: A chance to express
my feelings...A chance to change myself...
Shinobu: Ever since I got
this...
pg28
Shinobu: Even if it doesn't
work out, I'm telling him!
Shinobu: I've liked you
Shinobu: Toyota-kun, perhaps
you don't even remember giving it to me, but... to me it's special
pg29
Toyota-kun: I remember
Shinobu: Eh?
Toyota-kun: This is the only
one like it in the world, and it's a special ticket
Shinobu: Only one? Special?
What does he mean?
pg30
Toyota-kun: I wanted an opportunity
to talk to Kawakami-san, so I made this
(A ticket to go with the tea
house)
Toyota-kun: She's alone,
this is my chance!
Shinobu: Eh?
Toyota-kun: Please take
it!
Toyota-kun: A-Wait!
Shinobu: Eh?
Toyota-kun: I thought we could
talk about lots of stuff if you came to the tea house
(We never got the chance but...)
pg31
Shinobu: Then...
Toyota-kun: Yeah,
Toyota-kun: I also
Toyota-kun: Like you.
pg32
Shinobu: But Toyota-kun
Toyota-kun: Huh?
Shinobu: How did you know
me?
Shinobu: Our junior highs,
our first-year classes, and student councils were all different...
Toyota-kun: In junior high,
at an important game, we lost as a result of my error...I was really depressed
Shinobu: Excuse me
Shinobu: You tried the hardest.
Please use this, I'm not using it
Toyota-kun: A girl from the
other school lent me her towel
Toyota-kun: It was Kawakami-san
Shinobu: So that was why
he said I hadn't changed...
pg33
Toyota-kun: Well, that was
when I fell for you
(I was shocked when we were
at the same high school)
Shinobu: Eh?
Shinobu: Then, Toyota-kun...from
junior high...?
Toyota-kun: Well, do you remember?
Shinobu: Eh-
Shinobu: Sorry, not at all!^_^
<Toyota's Sweet Memory>
Toyota-kun: You're horrible!
I can't believe you don't remember!
Shinobu: Kyaa! Anti-violence...
pg34
<The ticket that is filled
with those two's feelings...the only one in the world>
Shinobu: Toyota-kuun!
Toyota-kun: Uwah-ha-ha-ha!
Awesome!
<Will surely always be
treasured. >
THE END |